Hey guys, so were writing our persuasive essay. We’ve been doing this for a few weeks and here is mine, hope you like it.
TIME FOR GYM
Don’t you agree that there should be more time for gym during school? Kids always say that gym is the most fun subject at school, but we only have gym class twice per week. If we had gym every day, kids will love it. Why? Because we would be able to play with our friends longer, they will get better at skills, and finally it helps our health. That’s why I think that there should be more time for gym during school.
My first reason why we should have more time for gym is because gym is the best and most fun subject at school, why? Because kids get to play with their friends longer it would be better if you’re playing with your friend longer right? Probably yes. You will enjoy playing in the gym if you have more time to do it. You can do a lot of different sports like gymnastics, basket- ball, volley-ball and other sports. You can practice yourself by asking your friends to play with you.
My second reason if why we should have more time at gym is kids will have more chances to improve skills. For example, you are in a basket- ball team or in any sports team you will have more time to practice then you can get better at your skills, right? If you keep practicing you will get better. It’s like if you’re in a soccer team and you want to get better at it, you can get your ball, go somewhere where you can’t get hit something that can broke, like kick the ball in to the wall.
Finally, my third reason why we should have more time at gym is because gym helps your health. Gym can be your exercise every day. You can stretch your muscles and be healthier. My brother goes to the gym sometimes he loves boxing so he loves gym. Don’t you think that yoga is healthy for you? It helps you to stretch your muscles. Isn’t that ringt?
Don’t you agree now? Think about the facts that I just told you about if why we should have more time at gym during school. Kids will have more fun, gym is the best subject at school, you can have more chances to improve skills and it helps your health. Do you agree now?
Ghilea